Friday, April 30, 2010

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Outside Or Inside


These days college students are facing a problem in choosing weather to live in university dormitories, or to live in apartments in the community.Both, dormitories and living in apartments, have advantages, but i think living in dormitories is better than living in outside apartments.

The first pont of comparision between the two topics is the financial side. Usually, dormitories are less expensive than that of living outside in the community. the sond point is that in dormitories you are less dependent on yourself, but when you live outside you become more dependent on yourself, since you must get your food, be responsible of your house, and finally you will gain more experience in your life.

Another oint to compare is that university dormitories are closer to the university than those apartments outside the university. In university dormitories there could be more discipline. For example, a unversity student who lives in a dormitory can't make a party or whatever he or she wants, but in outside apartments a university student could make anything he or she wants since there is no rules outside the community that will not allow the student to make a party.

One of the most important points of comparision is saftey. In university dormitories the security and saftey of the student is better than the security of outside apartment. In outside apartments a student may get robbed easily ,however; in dormitories there is excellent security, besides everyone living in dormitories is a student and students usually don't steal.

I prefer students to rent a university dormitories than to rent outside apartments. It is right that when you live by yourself you become more self-dependent, but saftey and security of students are the most important things for the students.




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